THE SHADOW DANCERS
-A ONE HOUR TV PILOT-
EXT. BAGHDAD OUTDOORS MARKET -- AFTERNOON
POV CAMERA scanning sky in OUTDOORS MARKET. LOTS OF VENDORS in market, dealing with their CUSTOMERS, ANIMALS, FRUITS, COOKWARE, TOYS, etc. SLIGHT HUM OF AIRCRAFT in distance, catching the attention of one of the VENDORS, who looks up. ZOOM in on TINY BLACK OBJECT looking somewhat like HELICOPTER, fading in and out of clouds in distance. He points to it.
INT. US MARINE BARRACKS. GREEN ZONE. BAGHDAD, IRAQ -- EARLY MORNING
Major 'Rune' Hazen, an intelligence officer who formed the first Marine remote viewing unit, now in charge of combat activities in the Green Zone, is talking to Captain.
TITLE: PRESENT
MAJOR
Is that convoy ready?
CAPTAIN
I doubt it. You said 0700.
MAJOR
Well, I changed my mind.
CAPTAIN
Is this based on one of your- psychic episodes, Major Rune?
MAJOR
I don't need your impertinence, Captain.
CAPTAIN
So far the men have tolerated your remote sensing crap...
MAJOR
Use that tone with me one more time and you'll wind up wishing you had signed up with the Republican Guard.
CAPTAIN
Oh, do we have to believe as well as obey? You know they call you Swengali-
MAJOR
They- or you- can call me whatever you goddamn well want to, but I don't need to listen to your naive skepticism. I've seen enough...
CAPTAIN
Yeah, you've made some really shrewd guesses.... but you're little hunches have also been devastatingly wrong.
MAJOR
Men die in combat no matter how you slice it.
CAPTAIN
I think this unit would be better off if you'd slice it with a normal kitchen knife instead of this telepathic-
MAJOR
Don't think, Captain. If you can, just break yourself of that bad habit. I know, by some strange, nasty quirk of fate, you are distantly related to my half-sister. Still, it would be a grave mistake to imagine that you now have a ticket for evading my wrath. I'm a legend at home, aren't I, Captain?
CAPTAIN
(smirking)
An urban legend. Is the one about the Ouija board really true?
MAJOR
Get that convoy ready by 0500!
Captain starts to leave.
MAJOR (CONT'D)
Oh, you can also salute me, you smug bastard.
Captain does and turns to leave.
INT. MARINE BARRACKS. GREEN ZONE, BAGHDAD, IRAQ -- MOMENTS LATER
Sergeant bursts into room.
SERGEANT
Get your ass out of bed, Corporal! Roll your men out to the mess. Swengali wants us there at 0500.
CORPORAL
He said 0700, goddamn it!
He sits up, making a wave-like motion with his hands.
CORPORAL (CONT'D)
(sarcastically)
Oh, has the cosmic ether changed?
SERGEANT
He's right half the time. That beats every other field commander in this freaking war.
CORPORAL
I'm glad you think 50% is OK.
SERGEANT
He was wrong about the sunspots. He was right about the Brit. No one even thought of that one.
CORPORAL
So his M'Lord High Ambassador poked one too many? They all do it.
SERGEANT
Maybe not quite so- abundantly.
CORPORAL
True, Svengali scored on that one.
SERGEANT
I'm glad you agree. Hurry up, now. We're late!
EXT. BAGHDAD OUTDOORS MARKET -- AFTERNOON
CAMERA PANS VENDORS' BOOTHS, NOISY, ENERGETIC CROWD- RACKS OF LAMB, VEGETABLE TRAYS,FURNITURE, TOYS, CARPETS. AERIAL SHOT: COPTER APPROACHING. CAMERA PANS to VENDORS and SHOPPERS as COPTER sweeps over VENDORS' GOODS, scaring crowd. It disappears, then suddenly makes another pass, SPRAYING MARKET WITH MACHINE GUN FIRE. Suddenly, MISSILE takes out the center of the Market. MEN, WOMEN AND CHILDREN are sprawled everywhere. CLOSE-IN on child clutching TINY WOODEN CAMEL, OLDER WOMAN BLEEDING FROM MOUTH, PROBABLY DEAD, with LIVE CHICKEN escaping from BASKET.
HUMVEE LEADING CONVOY CAREENS INTO MARKET. MARINES JUMP OUT DEPLOYING THEMSELVES INTO POSITIONS THROUGHOUT MARKET. MED. SHOT OF LEAD HUMVEE. A CORPORAL is getting out of HUMVEE, while talking to a PRIVATE, one of the men in his platoon.
CORPORAL
Oh, my God. Swengali was right. He was right again!
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